the graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of people who visited three museums over a
six year
period between 2000-2005.
Add a hyphen
six-year
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that,
there was a Remove the comma
apply
strikingly grow
for Replace the word
striking growth
National
Correct article usage
the National
museum
from China, Capitalize word
Museum
while
the other two had
experienced fluctuation in the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of visitors.
Looking at the graph, as regards the number
of visitos
Correct your spelling
visitors
visits
for
Change preposition
to
National
Correct article usage
the National
museum
, the figure rose steadily over the period and peaked at nearly 16 million in 2005, which Capitalize word
Museum
it
is the largest Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of visitors among
the museums. With respect to the Change preposition
to
number
of visitors for
Change preposition
to
Edo
Correct article usage
the Edo
museum
, it started at near 14 million and remained the same in 2001, Capitalize word
Museum
However
there was a fluctuation in the next four Add a comma
However,
year
for Edo.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
By contrast
, MET
Correct article usage
the MET
museum
started at 12 million but the figure halved in 2001 and remained the same for next
year. After that, there was a Correct article usage
the next
strikingly
increase in the Change the adverb
striking
number
of visiotrs
Correct your spelling
visitors
for
Change preposition
in
following
years.Correct article usage
the following
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