The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the information about the average monthly temperatures in
Paris
,
Dubai
and Sydney.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest temperature was in
Dubai
in August
while
the lowest temperature was in
Paris
in two months: December and January.
According to
what was shown, the average of temperatures was increasing slightly in two countries:
Dubai
and
Paris
from January to August by about 15 degrees.
Then
, it went down slowly to the
last
month of the years. In
Dubai
it fell down from 36 to 22
degree
while
in
Paris
it fell down from 20 to 5
degree
.
On the other hand
, the temperature in Sydney was slowly decreasing during January to July from 24 to 14
degree
. After that, from July to December it was rising slowly again to 24
degree
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, dubai, degree with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • line graph
  • trends
  • seasonal variations
  • temperature ranges
  • data points
  • climatic factors
  • latitude
  • correlations
  • anomalies
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • climate zones
  • thermometer readings
  • degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit
  • summertime
  • wintertime
  • meteorological
  • temperate
  • subtropical
  • mercury levels
  • interpolate
  • mean values
  • temperatures soar
  • temperatures plummet
  • heatwave
  • cold snap
  • mild
  • cool
  • warm
  • chilly
  • frigid
  • scorching
  • freezing
  • temperate
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