The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the information about the average monthly temperatures in
Paris
, Use synonyms
Dubai
and Sydney.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest temperature was in Linking Words
Dubai
in August Use synonyms
while
the lowest temperature was in Linking Words
Paris
in two months: December and January.
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According to
what was shown, the average of temperatures was increasing slightly in two countries: Linking Words
Dubai
and Use synonyms
Paris
from January to August by about 15 degrees. Use synonyms
Then
, it went down slowly to the Linking Words
last
month of the years. In Linking Words
Dubai
it fell down from 36 to 22 Use synonyms
degree
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while
in Linking Words
Paris
it fell down from 20 to 5 Use synonyms
degree
.
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On the other hand
, the temperature in Sydney was slowly decreasing during January to July from 24 to 14 Linking Words
degree
. After that, from July to December it was rising slowly again to 24 Use synonyms
degree
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, dubai, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 3 times.
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