The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the information about the average monthly temperatures in
Paris
, Dubai
and Sydney.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest temperature was in Dubai
in August while
the lowest temperature was in Paris
in two months: December and January.
According to
what was shown, the average of temperatures was increasing slightly in two countries: Dubai
and Paris
from January to August by about 15 degrees. Then
, it went down slowly to the last
month of the years. In Dubai
it fell down from 36 to 22 degree
while
in Paris
it fell down from 20 to 5 degree
.
On the other hand
, the temperature in Sydney was slowly decreasing during January to July from 24 to 14 degree
. After that, from July to December it was rising slowly again to 24 degree
.Submitted by um.maktoum2014 on
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