The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The average monthly temperatures in three big
cities
are shown in the graph over a period of 12 months
It is clear that
Paris and Dubay had a positive trend in temperature
since
January until August. Change preposition
from
By contrast
, Sydney has a negative trend for the same amount of time.
Dubai rose dramatically to a peak of 36 temperature
in Celcius for the first 8 months
and this
city had the highest temperature
compared to other cities
. Paris also
reached its peak in
the same time which was 20 Change preposition
at
temperature
in Celcius.Even though Sydney was the hottest city for the first 3 month
,it started to gradually decrease and ended up being the coldest after 5 Change to a plural noun
months
months
later.
However
,for the last
4 months
,Dubai and Paris lines started gradually declining and resulted being
cold Change preposition
in being
cities
.In contrast
, Sydney started gently increasing in temperature
and overtook those cities
being the warmest in
the end of year.Change the preposition
at
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