The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all which may be unhealty if eaten too much.

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all which may be unhealty if eaten too much.
Three pie
chart
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illustrate
consumption
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the consumption
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of
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
at
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in
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four different
type
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types
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of
meal
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meals
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; breakfast, lunch dinner and snacks in the USA.
Additionaly
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,
this
consumption
may
be affect
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human
healt
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health
if eaten too much. Units measured in
percentage
.
Overall
,
sodium
percentage
contributes mostly at dinner, 43% saturated fat
ratio
constituted mostly at dinner too, 37%, added
sugar
percentage
represented mostly in snacks, 42%. To closer look, at breakfast
sodium
consumption
ratio
comprised 14% per cent, soil fat and added
sugar
consumption
ratio
made up 16% per cent. At lunch,
sodium
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the sodium
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consumption
ratio
contributes 29%
percentage
and similar to
this
,
saturated
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the saturated
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fat
consumption
ratio
contributes 26%
percentage
.
However
, added
sugar
consumption
is less than two other nutrients,
its
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only 29% per cent during
the
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lunch time
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lunchtime
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.
In contrast
,
sodium
and saturated fat
consumption
percentage
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percentages
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is
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similar if they eat snacks, it is 14% and 21% relatively, despite added
sugar
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, sodium, sugar, percentage, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrient
  • percentage
  • prevalent
  • trend
  • comparison
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • implications
  • balanced (intake)
  • unhealthy
  • meal times
  • observations
  • habits
  • average
  • highlight
  • analyze
  • draw comparisons
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