The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph compares changes consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.
Overall
, among these four of
fast Change preposition
apply
food
, Hamburgers consistently had the highest number of Fix the agreement mistake
foods
times
eaten per year compared to pizza and fried chicken.
In 1985, Consumption of hamburgers started at 10 times
eaten per year there was a significant steady rise to 70 times
by 2015. In contrast
, Pizza started the highest at 60 times
eaten per year by 1985 but there was dramatic
Correct article usage
a dramatic
decreased
to 10 Replace the word
decrease
times
in 2015.
On the other hand
, consumption of fried chicken increased throughout this
period, starting at 3 times
in 1985 and rising to 60 times
in 2005. Eventually fried chicken showed
Verb problem
apply
remain
stable from 2005 to 2010. In the following couple of years, there was a Wrong verb form
remained
slightly
grow to 62 Change the word
slight
times
in 2015.Submitted by somiesunicha.k on
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