You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter. • Describe the problem with the equipment • Explain how this problem is affecting your work • Say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with

computer

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a computer

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that I purchased from your agency. The computer that I have bought from your company and at the worked in my home I discovered some problems which that computer’s monitor did not work. You told me it has

guarantee

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a guarantee

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for

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of

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three years.

Firstly

, I was producing the essential project,

then

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and then

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my

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all of the work

deleted

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.

Therefore

, I

am

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punished by my chairman and it

was

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bad

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the bad

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impact on my mood,

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I

have

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been full day

like

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with

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this

temper.

Furthermore

, I have

commence

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replying

this

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to this

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work.

Finally

, after one day I

have

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done but I

am

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utilized plenty of energy. I want to refund

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all the money I spent on your laptop not only the money was the problem or give another notebook in order to compensate. I look forward to your reply and resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully, Ozod Umarqulov