The charts below shows the average percentages in typical meals o three types of nutrients l, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
the presented pie charts compare three different kinds of nutrients ( sodium, saturated fat, added sugar) in four sections( typical meals). it is clearly seen that
proportion
of "Correct article usage
the proportion
dinner
" is the highest value in sodium and saturated fat, Use synonyms
while
"Linking Words
snacks
" Use synonyms
stands
in the first place in added sugar.
as can be seen, the Correct subject-verb agreement
stand
contribution
of Use synonyms
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
Use synonyms
are
the same in sodium Correct subject-verb agreement
is
with
14% , Change preposition
at
whereas
the share of lunch is 29% , Linking Words
the
remaining percentage in the first nutrients belongs to Correct word choice
and the
dinner
with 43%.
Use synonyms
according to
Linking Words
second
figures, the Correct article usage
the second
contribution
of Use synonyms
breakfast
, lunch and Use synonyms
snacks
Use synonyms
are
16%, 21% and 26% respectively. the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
contribution
of Use synonyms
dinner
(37%) is over twice as high as Use synonyms
breakfast
which Use synonyms
it
has the lowest Correct pronoun usage
apply
contribution
.
Use synonyms
according to
the third figure, the share of Linking Words
snacks
ranks first with 42% which is under three times as high as Use synonyms
breakfast
with Use synonyms
16
% Correct article usage
a 16
contribution
. lunch and Use synonyms
dinner
Use synonyms
is
contributed 19% and 23%. respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, snacks, contribution, breakfast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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