The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The given pie charts compare data about the percentage of people who are British inhabitants who used 5 various items of transportation for travelling to university for work or study in 2 several years( 2004 and 2009).
Overall
, It was important that the main things that people used for transport were buses and cars
instead
of trains and walking;
moreover
, the number of population who were using public form increased.
According to
the graphs, in 2004 car, the best way to go to the institute, was nearly half per cent; but it reduced to 28% in 2009. Bus, which was the second one, in the beginning, was 33%;
then
it had a 13% jump and reached the first level. The diagrams demonstrate that the trend of Bicycles, the third one in both years, went up;
furthermore
, it was 9% in 2004 and touched 16% in 2009. The
last
ones were walking and trains ;
additionally
, they had the same stage as the prior;
nevertheless
, their fashion leapt, so walking and trains were 4 and 3 per cent in 2004;
thereafter
, they hit 4% and 6%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Mode of transportation
  • Significant percentage
  • Noticeable decrease/increase
  • Environmentally friendly
  • Public transit systems
  • Commuting habits
  • Relatively stable
  • Sustainable
  • Collective modes of transportation
  • Environmental awareness
  • Economic factors
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