The graph below shows the population of foxes on four diffeent Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of foxes on four diffeent Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates data on the
population
of
foxes
in
four
different parts of Californian
islands
from 1994 until 2014. During the early years, the data showed that three out of
four
islands
had a high fox
population
with
Santa
Catalina being the lowest of the three having around 1333
foxes
, and
Santa
Rosa started with the highest at approximately 1780
foxes
.
However
, from 1994 until 2000, all
four
of the
islands
experienced a major fall in the figure of fox populations, and the year 2000 was the lowest point of some of the
islands
, as they had roughly around 18 to 0
foxes
.
After
this
dramatic decrease,
Santa
Catalina’s fox
population
grew a year after the decrease and continued to increase until 2014 with 1666
foxes
.
Santa
Cruz's recovery was slow, until 4 years later the number of
foxes
greatly expanded and slightly surpassed
Santa
Catalina.
On the other hand
, San Miguel and
Santa
Rosa began increasing in 2006 and San Miguel ended at around 550.
Santa
Rosa ended lower than it had started with 800
foxes
. In conclusion, the
population
of
foxes
on the
four
Californian
islands
encountered significant declines between 1994 and 2000, followed by degrees of recovery that varied.
Santa
Cruz saw the most substantial rebound,
while
San Miguel maintained the same
population
throughout the period.
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