The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
The pie
chart
compares the numbers of
people
's opinions about how the money for elderly
people
's education should be placed, and the bar
chart
demonstrates the reasons for those
people
's decisions.
It is clear that
most adults decided
to begin
their education way because of interest in subjects and to gain qualifications. We can
also
see that the majority of the
people
in the survey chose the answer individually.
According to
the bar
chart
the majority of elderly
people
chose to study to explore interesting subjects and gain a lot of experience, with 40 and 38 votes relatively.
However
, the minority of the
voters
chose that because of the new jobs available and new acquaintances, with 12 and 9
voters
relatively. The other 62
voters
equally decided to do so because of new skills for their current job, learning and promotion in their ongoing jobs. Looking at the pie
chart
, we can see that the majority of
people
made a decision to share the costs of each course individually, with 40% of
voters
,
while
only a quarter of
voters
decided to share costs by
people
's taxes and bills. The other 35% of
people
think that employees themselves should pay all the costs of the classes.
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