The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking
water
in an Australian town. The picture above illustrates the process of getting drinking
water
from rainwater in an Australian town,
due to
water
source issues. It starts with collecting rain into drains and ends up with tidewater
water
being flown from the faucet. Collected liquid from different houses, together goes into a huge rain filter, which is placed under the ground. Already filtered clean rain
then
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transported to storage, which accommodates more litres than the filter one, and after getting all the product,
water
goes to the next stage of the process.
Thereafter
, from the storage,
water
moves in pipes to the liquid treatment block. In
this
step, it is getting treatment, and saturated with chemicals. Former dirty
water
gets some nutrients and minerals, to become tasteful and harmless.
Finally
, drinking
water
is ready to use, and it only needs to be delivered to the houses by pipes.
That is
how Australians get clean
water
despite a lack of
water
resources.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rainwater harvesting
  • rooftops
  • drains and gutters
  • underground storage tanks
  • water treatment plant
  • purification
  • filtration
  • chemical treatment
  • impurities
  • microorganisms
  • distribution system
  • potable water
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