The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australians of different ages who had been involved in the exercise in 2010.
In general, it is clearly seen that
,
the biggest percentage of women was between age 45 and 54, Remove the comma
apply
whereas
the proportion of men was from 15 to 24.
Firstly
, the highest of males who do regular physical activities were young adults from 15 years old to 24 years old at 52.8 per cent
followed by elders (65 and over) at 46.7 per cent
. Secondly
, for females, the proportion of Australian women aged between 45 and 54 was higher at 53.3 % and in the second place was adult females at 53 per cent
.
On the other hand
, the lower percentage of Australian females did exercised 47,1 per cent
were elderly women and 39.5 per cent
for men approximately 39.5 % with aged from 35 to 44.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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