The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
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undergraduate
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an undergraduate
anthropology
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of
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earning
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earnings
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from in
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an
anthropology
career after 5 years working
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of working
experienced
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experience
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given are percentages.
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anthropology
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Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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