The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the changes that have occurred in Nelson, a seaside resort, in recent days in comparison with 2000.
Overall
, the progressive development of infrastructure was the most notable change.
To begin
with, there were several major changes to transport in the town. New bike rental services are now provided in the city
centre. Next,
a new stretch of railway was built running directly from the university to the city
centre; however
, a new train station was constructed for
this
reason. Moreover
, the only highway was transformed into a pedestrian line.
There have also
been changes to the business sector in Nelson. In the northeast part of the city
, the new shopping mall was sprung up. Instead
of old street markets on the west side of the city
centre, a new shop appeared, and a restaurant was founded in front of it. The final change would be a new dormitory of the university on the right side of itself.Submitted by Umar on
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