The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The graph illustrates the digit of
visits
to a commune internet site in the first and second year of usage between 12 countries starting from September to August.
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Overall
, it is clearly shown that the visitors in the second year soared progressively across all months compared to the first year visitors Linking Words
numbers
were simple .
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to begin
with , the website visitors for the first period in September started at less than 1.000 Linking Words
then
increased regularly from 5.000 in October to double in both November and December. Linking Words
however
, in February the Linking Words
numbers
decreased considerably to just about 500 Use synonyms
visits
and remained steady until the next month.Use synonyms
Also
,it rose sharply in the remaining months presented in the figure starting with 5000 Linking Words
visits
in April and ending with 15.500 in August.
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On the other hand
,the second era digital started nearly with 1.500 Linking Words
visits
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then
it rose sharply to 15.500 in both November and December. Linking Words
then
the Linking Words
numbers
fluctuated began from 15.500 in January to 20.000 in May.After that, it increased approximately to 22.500 in June and July. Use synonyms
Then
, in the end, the Linking Words
numbers
fell significantly to 12.500 Use synonyms
visits
in August.Use synonyms
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