The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The graph illustrates the digit of
visits
to a commune internet site in the first and second year of usage between 12 countries starting from September to August.
Overall
, it is clearly shown that the visitors in the second year soared progressively across all months compared to the first year visitors numbers
were simple .
to begin
with , the website visitors for the first period in September started at less than 1.000 then
increased regularly from 5.000 in October to double in both November and December. however
, in February the numbers
decreased considerably to just about 500 visits
and remained steady until the next month.Also
,it rose sharply in the remaining months presented in the figure starting with 5000 visits
in April and ending with 15.500 in August.
On the other hand
,the second era digital started nearly with 1.500 visits
then
it rose sharply to 15.500 in both November and December. then
the numbers
fluctuated began from 15.500 in January to 20.000 in May.After that, it increased approximately to 22.500 in June and July. Then
, in the end, the numbers
fell significantly to 12.500 visits
in August.Submitted by bashayeralamer on
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