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The graph below shows information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000

The graph below shows information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000
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The table delineates statistics regarding healthcare systems in
Austria
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,
France
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, and
Sweden
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 from 1980 to 2000. It is discernible that
Sweden
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 has the highest data in all three examined categories throughout the whole period. In 1980,
Sweden
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 contributed the most to the table in all aspects, at 3.6 in physicians, 6.4 in hospital beds, and 23 in the average stay in hospitals. Meanwhile,
Austria
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 had the fewest medical doctors, specifically 0.8 per 1000 people.
Furthermore
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, the amount of hospital beds in
France
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 is the lowest, at 0.2 per 1000 people.
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, the days of hospital stay in
Austria
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 were twice higher than that of
France
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, at 18 and 9 respectively. By the end of the period, the majority of the number witnessed upward trends. In 2020, the number of physicians in
Austria
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 and
Sweden
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 increased by 0.2, as opposed to
France
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 as the figure hit the lowest point at 1.3. In the same year, all three countries provided more healthcare beds than before, at 3.7 in
Austria
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, 1.6 in
France
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 and 6.9 in
Sweden
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. An opposite tendency was seen in the
last
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 category, as
French
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the French
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 and Swedish shortened their hospital stay by 4 and 2 days respectively,
while
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 the figure for
Austria
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 remained level.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words austria, france, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Healthcare
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Life expectancy
  • Medical technology
  • Government spending
  • Population health
  • Access to medical care
  • Healthcare policies
  • Economic climate
  • Inflation rates
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Public health
  • Quality of care
  • Preventive medicine
  • Chronic diseases
  • Healthcare infrastructure
  • Universal health coverage
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