The graphs below show the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001.

The line graphs depict information about the population density in European prisons, which is categorized

according to

sex, between 1911 and 2000 with a 10-year interval. From an

overall

perspective, it is readily apparent that the number of crimes which

was

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committed by

male

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males

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had an upward

trend

,

however

, the statistics show the opposite

trend

among European women. It

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that from the beginning year to the

last

the number of female criminals dramatically decreased.

To begin

with the male graph, it is obviously illustrated that after a significant decrease from 25000 to roughly 20000

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the first decade, it almost stayed constant for a 60-year interval.

Nonetheless

, it presented a slightly increasing tendency in

this

period. After 1981,

this

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little upward

trend

changed into a remarkable rise. To put it differently, the men’s preferences to commit crime surged and outrun their population in

first

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year, in 1911.

On the other hand

, the prevalence of crime among women noticeably fell throughout the years. Despite the fact that at the beginning of the assessed

year

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the female prisoners were numberless, the first outstanding reduction happened in 1921.

Subsequently

, it remained steady for 30 years until 1951.

Then

, the women’s population in prisons

repetitively

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reduced.

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female prisoners moved upward to almost 2500 in 1971, it stuck in general

trend

and deteriorated after that.