Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, social science is more and more developed, the world is becoming more modern and rich.
Therefore
, today we humans have many choices
, for me I partly agree with it because for
rich Change preposition
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people
, they
will have more Correct pronoun usage
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choices
while
poor people
only have one choice.
On the one hand, for
the rich, Change preposition
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they
will have many Correct pronoun usage
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choices
, for example
, when going to the hospital, instead
of choosing ordinary services, they will have many choices
such
as not having to wait in line for a long time to get a number to see a doctor, they will go to a higher floor, there will be good service, everything will be handled quickly. In addition
, when they travel, they can choose a good hotel, a hotel with super good facilities and services so that they can enjoy a wonderful trip. They can experience
what they want to accumulate for themselves their experiences, knowledge, and happiness.
On the other hand
, for
those who do not have the same conditions as the rich, Change preposition
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they
will not have many Correct pronoun usage
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choices
but instead
only have one choice. They are people
who do not have many choices
, so when choosing something, they will look and choose very carefully, and the first thing they prioritize when choosing is the item or service with a cheap price. For example
, as
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when
traveling
, the rich choose places with high prices, good services, or accommodation, Change the spelling
travelling
while
the poor choose places with low prices and tourist destinations that have good prices for them.
In conclusion, I want to say that people
today have many choices
only for the rich, but for
those who do not have the conditions, Change preposition
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they
will have very few Correct pronoun usage
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choices
. However
, that does not mean that their lives become unhappy, or do not have the experience
like the rich. Anyway, they will experience
the way the poor have. They will still be happy with their family and their life, and it is because of that poverty that they always find ways to enjoy and experience
the life they have so as not to fall behind society.Submitted by jakelong16091994 on
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