You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph illustrates the proportion of females moving abroad for their tertiary education in 1980 and 2015. The
unit
are measured in percentage.
The Fix the agreement mistake
units
overall
impression of the chart is that, almost in all the countries, there was a significant growth in female students
. While
Australia
was the only country where numbers remained the same. Even after having the same number
Australia
had the highest number
of female students
in both the years.
To begin
with, around 35% of women chose UK
and the USA as their Correct article usage
the UK
destination
to continue their higher education in 1980. However
, these
Correct determiner usage
this
number
rose to 55% approximately in 2015. On other
hand, Correct article usage
the other
Soth
Korea had never been a very popular Correct your spelling
South
destination
for girls, lowest number
for
female Change preposition
of
students
enrolled themselves
in S. Korean universities in both Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
years. (15% and 30% respectively.)
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apply
Furthermore
, Australia
had
been a very popular study Wrong verb form
has
destination
among females. Almost 60% of female students
were going to Australia
to study in both the
years. And France seems to be Correct article usage
apply
second
Correct article usage
the second
popular
Correct quantifier usage
most popular
destination
for women, as 50% of women were enrolled in French universities in 1980 and roughly 55% in 2015.Submitted by vasudha.gupta0818 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, australia, number, destination with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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