The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph illustrates the proportion of females moving abroad for their tertiary education in 1980 and 2015. The
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are measured in percentage. The
overall
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impression of the chart is that, almost in all the countries, there was a significant growth in female
students
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.
While
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Australia
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was the only country where numbers remained the same. Even after having the same
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Australia
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had the highest
number
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of female
students
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in both the years.
To begin
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with, around 35% of women chose
UK
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the UK
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and the USA as their
destination
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to continue their higher education in 1980.
However
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,
these
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number
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rose to 55% approximately in 2015. On
other
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hand,
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Korea had never been a very popular
destination
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for girls, lowest
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for
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female
students
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enrolled
themselves
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in S. Korean universities in both
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years. (15% and 30% respectively.)
Furthermore
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,
Australia
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had
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been a very popular study
destination
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among females. Almost 60% of female
students
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were going to
Australia
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to study in both
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years. And France seems to be
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popular
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destination
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for women, as 50% of women were enrolled in French universities in 1980 and roughly 55% in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, australia, number, destination with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • higher education
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • significant
  • comparison
  • identify
  • highest
  • lowest
  • contextual
  • global
  • relevant
  • constant
  • substantial
  • fluctuation
  • proportional
  • data
  • evaluate
  • analyze
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