The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Line Chart displays the
quantity
of guests visiting The Louvre, The London Science Change the quantifier
number
Museum
, The Vatican Museums
and, the Shenzhen Museum
since
1980 to 2015.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the Louvre and Vatican Museums
have had the highest number
of visitor
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visitors
while
London
Science Correct article usage
the London
Museum
and Shenzhen Museum
had the lowest.
The Louvre Museum
started near
8 Change the word
nearly
million
of
Change preposition
apply
visits
in 1980, and during the following years the number
floating until
reached just below 10 Change preposition
apply
million
of
tourists. The Vatican Change preposition
apply
Museums
had around 5 million
in 1980, from there the number
of visits
went up indefinitely and finished nearly
9 Change preposition
at nearly
million
in 2015.
London Science Museum
between 1980 and 1985 had 4 million
of
Change preposition
apply
visits
however
from 1990 the visits
dramatically dropped being the Museum
with less
visitors in 2015 Change the quantifier
fewer
with
just over 2 Change preposition
to
million
. About
Shenzhen Change preposition
apply
Museums
between 1980 and 2000
the Add a comma
2000,
number
of visits
remained in
just over 3 Change preposition
at
million
of
visitors and Change preposition
apply
then
the amount
of people going to the Change the quantifier
number
museum
went up reaching closely
to 4 Rephrase
close
million
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