The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line Chart displays the
number
of guests visiting The Louvre, The London Science
Museum
, The Vatican
Museums
and, the Shenzhen
Museum
from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the Louvre and Vatican
Museums
have had the highest
number
of visitors
while
The London Science
Museum
and Shenzhen
Museum
had the lowest. The Louvre
Museum
started with 8
million
visits
in 1980, and during the following
years
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the
number
floating reached just below 10
million
tourists. The Vatican
Museums
had around 5
million
in 1980, from there the
number
of
visits
went up indefinitely and finished at nearly 9
million
in 2015. London Science
Museum
between 1980 and 1985 had 4
million
of
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visits
however
from 1990 the
visits
dramatically dropped being the
Museum
with
less
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fewer
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visitors in 2015
with
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to
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just over 2
million
.
About
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Shenzhen
Museums
between 1980 and
2000
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2000,
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the
number
of
visits
remained at just over 3
million
of
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visitors and
then
the
number
of people going to the
museum
went up reaching close to 4
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, museums, million, visits with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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