The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Line Chart displays the
number
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of guests visiting The Louvre, The London Science
Museum
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, The Vatican
Museums
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and, the Shenzhen
Museum
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from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
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, the Louvre and Vatican
Museums
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have had the highest
number
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of visitors
while
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The London Science
Museum
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and Shenzhen
Museum
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had the lowest. The Louvre
Museum
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started with 8
million
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visits
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in 1980, and during the following
years
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years,
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the
number
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floating reached just below 10
million
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tourists. The Vatican
Museums
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had around 5
million
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in 1980, from there the
number
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of
visits
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went up indefinitely and finished at nearly 9
million
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in 2015. London Science
Museum
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between 1980 and 1985 had 4
million
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of
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visits
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however
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from 1990 the
visits
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dramatically dropped being the
Museum
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with
less
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fewer
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visitors in 2015
with
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to
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just over 2
million
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.
About
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Shenzhen
Museums
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between 1980 and
2000
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2000,
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the
number
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of
visits
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remained at just over 3
million
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of
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visitors and
then
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the
number
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of people going to the
museum
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went up reaching close to 4
million
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, museums, million, visits with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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