The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line Chart displays the
number
of guests visiting The Louvre, The London Science Museum
, The Vatican Museums
and, the Shenzhen Museum
from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, the Louvre and Vatican Museums
have had the highest number
of visitors while
The London Science Museum
and Shenzhen Museum
had the lowest.
The Louvre Museum
started with 8 million
visits
in 1980, and during the following years
the Add a comma
years,
number
floating reached just below 10 million
tourists. The Vatican Museums
had around 5 million
in 1980, from there the number
of visits
went up indefinitely and finished at nearly 9 million
in 2015.
London Science Museum
between 1980 and 1985 had 4 million
of
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apply
visits
however
from 1990 the visits
dramatically dropped being the Museum
with less
visitors in 2015 Change the quantifier
fewer
with
just over 2 Change preposition
to
million
. About
Shenzhen Change preposition
apply
Museums
between 1980 and 2000
the Add a comma
2000,
number
of visits
remained at just over 3 million
of
visitors and Change preposition
apply
then
the number
of people going to the museum
went up reaching close to 4 million
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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