The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the distribution of three different valuable metals'
price
histories namely Gold,
Platinum
and Palladium over a
period
of 9 years between 2013 and 2021. The units are measured in $ per
oz
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the figures for all metals showed an upward trend with the exception of
Platinum
over the
period
. Interestingly, the highest
price
at the end
of the
period
was Palladium. At the beginning of the
period
, the
price
of
Platinum
and Gold started at around $1500/
oz
and both figures had a slight decrease to $1000/
oz
and $1200/
oz
, respectively in 2015. From
this
point onwards, Gold's
price
increased regularly to around $1800 in 2020 and remained stable in the following year.
However
,
Platinum
's
price
constituted a considerable fall at just under $1000/
oz
in 2020, before went up to well above $1000/
oz
in 2021.
On the other hand
, Palladium's
price
stood at roughly $700/
oz
in 2013 and it oscillated to exactly $1000/
oz
in 2018.
Thereafter
, it soared up to around $2500/
oz
at the end
of the
period
.
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