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The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of full-time undergraduate students at universities in three cities by subject area. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of full-time undergraduates at universities in three different cities, by subject area.
Moreover
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, there are five various subjects, namely Business, Arts, Sciences,
Law
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, and
Medicine
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.
Overall
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, in the three areas (London, New
York
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, and
Paris
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 ), arts generally account for the highest rate, with the exception of New
York
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.
In contrast
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,
law
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 and
medicine
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 comprise a lower percentage.
To begin
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 with, arts constitute 42% and 43% in London and
Paris
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, respectively, making up 35% in New
York
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.
Subsequently
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, the business represents 25% in London, showing the highest proportion (35%) in New
York
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.
However
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, it accounts for the lowest rate (10 per cent) in
Paris
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. Looking at the other subjects in detail, the percentage of
law
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 and sciences are equivalent (15%) in New
York
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;
nevertheless
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,
medicine
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 only comprises 5%.
Next,
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the rate of business and
law
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 are equal (10%) in
Paris
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, and
medicine
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 represents 18%. As for, Landon, both
law
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 and
medicine
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 do not exceed 10 per cent but
law
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 makes up 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words law, medicine, york, paris with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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