The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the history of three different
metals
Fix the agreement mistake
metal prices
price
between 2013 to 2021. The units given are dollars
per ounce.
Overall
, all metals price
rose drastically over the recorded years, with the notable exception where platinum dropped steadily and stood at the lowest than others.
Looking at the palladium and gold history, in 2013, palladium started at the lower point among others two, 750 Fix the agreement mistake
prices
dollars
per oz
while
gold fell a second close with 1400 dollars
per oz
. However
, since
2014 until 2018, palladium Change preposition
from
price
has
Wrong verb form
had
Correct article usage
a flactuation
flactuation
trend before Correct your spelling
fluctuation
reach
a peak point at 2300 Change the verb form
reaching
dollars
per oz
in 2021 which stood a
higher out of all three metals. Change the article
apply
Similarly
, gold
Add an article
the gold
price
had a pleatue
trend and still fell a second close, Correct your spelling
pleasure
pleated
accounted
at 1750 Wrong verb form
accounting
dollars
per oz
.
Regarding to
platinum, in 2013, stood at the higher compared to others before decreased to 800 Remove the preposition
apply
dollars
per oz
in 2020. However
, a slightly
rise in the year 2021 but still stood at the least.Change the adverb
slight
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, dollars, oz with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 4 times.
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