The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts in 2012 with the predictions for 2030
The pie charts show six categories of
energy
capacity
in gigawatts in 2012 and predictions for 2030. Overall
, we can see that the proportion of energy
produced by fossil fuels will decrease, while
energy
capacity
by renewables such
as solar and wind will increase.
A more detailed view on
the pie charts reveals that, in 2012 64% of Change preposition
of
energy
capacity
was produced by fossil fuels but in 2030 this
percentage will meet a significant fall of 20%,
and Remove the comma
apply
reaches
44% in 2030. Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
While
the wind resource role in producing energy
in 2030 (12%) will be more than twice the amount it was in 2012 (5%) and the Solar energy
capacity
will construct nearly one fourth
of the total Add a hyphen
one-fourth
energy
capacity
(18%) which is a noticeable increase from 2% in 2012.
The other energy
resources almost remain the same during the mentioned period. Flexible capacity
will meet 1% reduction, from 2% to 1%, while
nuclear energy
will be increased from 5% of the whole to 6%. Other renewables
role in producing Change noun form
renewable's
renewables'
enery
will decrease from 22% percent to 19%.Correct your spelling
energy
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