The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
The
given
bar chart Verb problem
apply
illustrated
information about exporting Wrong verb form
illustrates
of
Change preposition
apply
the
different Correct article usage
apply
products
, such
as earnings between
the time period Change preposition
over
one
Change preposition
of one
year
.
At one glance, the
Correct article usage
apply
Pedroleum
Correct your spelling
Petroleum
products
and Engineered goods were the most exported in both year
, except Gems and Change to a plural noun
years
Jewellary
, Agricultural Correct your spelling
Jewellery
products
and Textiles, as these figures showed a
lowest percentage.
To clearly Change the article
the
seen
that, In Wrong verb form
see
the
2015,Change the article
apply
Pedroleum
Correct your spelling
petroleum
products
accounted for exactly 60$, and after one year
, It was
slightly Verb problem
it
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
just
about 63$.The fraction of Engineered goods started Change preposition
by just
with
nearly 57$ Change preposition
at
while
, In the
2016 Correct article usage
apply
year
, It saw a rise approximately
62$.
Change preposition
of approximately
To
Change preposition
In
contrary
, The figure Correct article usage
the contrary
of
Gems and Change preposition
for
Jewellary
was slightly higher rather than Correct your spelling
jewellery
other kind
of Change the wording
another kind
other kinds
products
, which were roughly 43$ at the begin
of Replace the word
beginning
period
, but In the Add an article
the period
year
2016,it was a little decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
at
40$.Agricultural Change preposition
to
products
were remaining
the same in the both of Wrong verb form
remained
year
. The Textile Fix the agreement mistake
years
products
underwent a 25$ and finally
,It increased at 32$Submitted by shakhzod0905 on
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