You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and are interested in seeking information and guidance about the various places in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeing help. In your letter: •explain why you are writing the letter. •what kind of information you want. •how and when you can get requested information.

Dear
sir
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Sir
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or
madam
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Madam
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, I am writing
this
letter for your help to explore
this
city as I
have
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apply
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landed a few days ago and do not know much about
this
place.I would really appreciate it if your company would provide me
assistance
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with assistance
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.
Although
I
get
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a job
into
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in
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warehouse
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a warehouse
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of a restaurant but
inspite
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spite
being there it is quite difficult to make friends
those
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who
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can provide me
as
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with as
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much as information I
required
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. I need to know about the suburbs area and shopping malls etc. I am sharing
you
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my email address so that you can reach me
out
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easily and
also
it is a more convenient way to communicate. Please look into it ,hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Maria
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to enhance readability.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the type of guidance required to improve clarity.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, suitable for the purpose.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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