More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are some possible solutions?
People
in developing countries are increasingly buying Use synonyms
cars
for the first time. The most common problem is, without being aware of Use synonyms
road
safety, Use synonyms
people
buy their first Use synonyms
cars
, and the solution would be not permitting Use synonyms
people
to buy Use synonyms
cars
, without learning Use synonyms
driving
properly.
To start with, Change the verb form
to drive
people
are buying Use synonyms
cars
without learning driving Use synonyms
skill
fully, and Fix the agreement mistake
skills
therefore
they cannot maintain Linking Words
traffic
rules properly. Use synonyms
This
leads to fatal Linking Words
road
accidents, injury and even life loss of the driver, his fellow passengers, and the pedestrians. Use synonyms
Moreover
, if every individual Linking Words
start
buying Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
car
of his own, each car would be for each person, and there Add an article
the car
a car
will
be a lot of Wrong verb form
would
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
Fix the agreement mistake
jams
in
the Change preposition
on
road
. Use synonyms
For example
, in Mumbai, India, everyone has their own vehicle and that causes a huge Linking Words
traffic
jam on the roads.
One of the possible Use synonyms
solution
Change to a plural noun
solutions
of
these problems would be not granting Change preposition
to
driver's
license without proper testing. If a driver has Correct article usage
a driver's
full
, valid license, there is Add an article
a full
a
less possibility of Correct article usage
apply
accident
. Add an article
an accident
In addition
, the government and different agencies should come forward, and start Linking Words
awareness
campaign, which would promote using public Add an article
an awareness
transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
instead
of personal Linking Words
cars
. Public Use synonyms
transports
can carry at least 10 to 20 passengers at a time, and that will mitigate the number of vehicles on the Fix the agreement mistake
transport
road
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Japan, numerous awareness campaigns about using public transportLinking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
has
significantly reduced the Correct subject-verb agreement
have
vehicles
on the Correct quantifier usage
number of vehicles
road
and Use synonyms
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
.
Fix the agreement mistake
jams
To conclude
, not knowing Linking Words
driving
fully Wrong verb form
how to drive
Linking Words
however
, buying Add the comma(s)
, however
first
car is the cause of Change the article
the first
road
accidents and death. Several awareness campaigns will help to reduce the number of Use synonyms
cars
Use synonyms
in
the Change preposition
on
road
.Use synonyms
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