The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps compare changes that happened in Southside, which is the shopping mall, in two various times ( now and future).

Overall

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, places related to entertainment and sport will be destroyed

while

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both malls and car parks will develop.

According to

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the picture, Today, of shop centre has a car park, fitness centre and golf courses;

moreover

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, all of them except the car park, which will become bigger, will be destroyed. The mall will be larger than prior and will have two entrances. The graphs demonstrate that department stores, restaurants, and supermarkets will be the same as in the past, but they will be bigger. The information centre will replaced by a Cafe;

furthermore

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, in the north of

this

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region, we can see a Play area, a Noodle shop and a cinema which will be replaced by

Beauty

Correct article usage

a Beauty

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Salone, a shoe

store

Use synonyms

, and

Costemicstore

Correct article usage

a Costemicstore

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In addition

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, the number of market stores will climb;

as a result

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, we will have a Gift shop, another shoe

store

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, and a fashion

store

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, which will be between the department

store

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and a restaurant.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words store with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much as time as they should with their families or on lesisure activites. What is your opion ?