The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps compare changes that happened in Southside, which is the shopping mall, in two various times ( now and future).
Overall
, places related to entertainment and sport will be destroyed
while
both malls and car parks will develop.
According to
the picture, Today, of shop centre has a car park, fitness centre and golf courses;
moreover
, all of them except the car park, which will become bigger, will be destroyed. The mall will be larger than prior and will have two entrances. The graphs demonstrate that department stores, restaurants, and supermarkets will be the same as in the past, but they will be bigger. The information centre will replaced by a Cafe;
furthermore
, in the north of
this
region, we can see a Play area, a Noodle shop and a cinema which will be replaced by
Beauty
Correct article usage
a Beauty
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Salone, a shoe
store
, and
Costemicstore
Correct article usage
a Costemicstore
show examples
.
In addition
, the number of market stores will climb;
as a result
, we will have a Gift shop, another shoe
store
, and a fashion
store
, which will be between the department
store
and a restaurant.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words store with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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