The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

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emigration to five selected destinations between 2004 and 2007, measured in thousands.

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emigrants throughout the period. The number of people moving to Australia started at around 42,000 in 2004 and peaked at about 52,000 in 2006, before slightly declining to approximately 43,000 in 2007. Spain was the second most popular destination. Around 35,000

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emigrants moved to Spain in 2004, with a small decrease in the following years, reaching about 28,000 in 2007. New Zealand and the USA had relatively lower and more stable emigration figures. Both countries saw numbers ranging between 20,000 and 25,000 across the four years, with New Zealand slightly ahead of the USA. France had the lowest number of

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emigrants among the selected destinations. The figures for France remained steady, starting at 22,000 in 2004 and finishing at around 18,000 in 2007.

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