The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following maps compare the development of various commercial units and
railway
tracks from 1998 until the present day.
Overall
, the station has undergone a tremendous scale of development in recent years. Most notably, a new
railway
section to the left has been constructed, and the toilets have been replaced with restaurants and shops. looking at the centre, the toilet complex is replaced by two commercial outlets and a large restaurant for the public. To the east, the
railway
tracks remained unchanged,
however
, the ticket office is now expanded to facilitate the increasing number of travellers, and a small shop next to it was demolished.
Additionally
, it was decided not to bring down the cafe, and it remained there. to the west side of the station, the land was empty with no buildings, to make it productive, a new section of
railway
has been developed with three tracks, and to its opposite side, a supermarket is
also
constructed for shoppers to shop.
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