The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The presented map demonstrates the
town
of Garlsdon. There is a new supermarket will be established. The map shows the planning of the supermarket for the town
.
Overall
, Carlson's population is 65000. The first site
is in the countryside, while
the second site
is in a vibrant and congested area.
To begin
with, site
1 is near Hindom town
. The number of citizens in this
town
is 10000 and it is about 12 km far from site
1. Site
1 contains a railway and main roads. The supermarket will be in the northwest area. It will help more people in the industry region.
On the other hand
, site
2 is in the centre. The railways are crossing this
area. It is in the middle between two cities. Cransdon city is about 25 km distance with a high population of about 29000 individuals. Nevertheless
, Bransdon is 16 km away from the half population of Cransdon town
. They no traffic zone on site
2. Thus
, there are not any
main roads.Rephrase
no
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