The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The presented map demonstrates the
town
of Garlsdon. There is a new supermarket will be established. The map shows the planning of the supermarket for the
town
.
Overall
, Carlson's population is 65000. The first
site
is in the countryside,
while
the second
site
is in a vibrant and congested area.
To begin
with,
site
1 is near Hindom
town
. The number of citizens in
this
town
is 10000 and it is about 12 km far from
site
1.
Site
1 contains a railway and main roads. The supermarket will be in the northwest area. It will help more people in the industry region.
On the other hand
,
site
2 is in the centre. The railways are crossing
this
area. It is in the middle between two cities. Cransdon city is about 25 km distance with a high population of about 29000 individuals.
Nevertheless
, Bransdon is 16 km away from the half population of Cransdon
town
. They no traffic zone on
site
2.
Thus
, there are
not any
Rephrase
no
show examples
main roads.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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