The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian and Indian call centres in connection wit hthe various cae models they produce.

The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian and Indian call centres in connection wit hthe various cae models they produce.
The previous bar chart illustrates the
amount
Change the quantifier
number
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of people who made calls to a Nigerian call centre regarding different types of cars they manufactured in the years 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there was a certain decrease in the number of calls made in the
year
2010 to 2015 in almost every car
model
, except for only one.
Furthermore
,
model
D remained the most popular (
although
with some decline)
while
model
B
remained the lowest for both years. In detail, in the
year
2015, the proportion of calls declined for almost every kind of car (A,
B
,D,E) except for "C" which increased from 71 to 84.
Moreover
,
model
B
got the biggest drop from 33 to 24. Even though car type D kept its popularity, it
also
exhibited a decrease from 94 in the
year
2010 to 88 in the
year
2015.
In contrast
,
model
B
fell 9 calls, showing a number of 24.
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