You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try get a job. You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • say why he/she would not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her • suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Rachel I hope
this
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letter finds you well. I recently received your letter asking for advice going to college or getting a
job
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. I think
instead
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of applying for a college it will be better if you find a good
job
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with good salary. Here is some reasons why it's better to get a
job
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:
firstly
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,the contract of your college will damage to your career and to your life. Because these days contacts of high schools are increasing and it's becoming a huge amount of money.
Secondly
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, even if you study and get diploma. Nowadays,not all the jobs are demanding a diploma. That means that it is just a waste of time.
On the other hand
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, getting a
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could be a fantastic move for you.Because now you have moved on to another city and you are alone. I think you are scared a little of being alone. It will be better if you spend your day at work and earn money for yourself.
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, nowadays it is not too hard to get a
job
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. I hope you will find a perfect
job
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for yourself.
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, I have a few
job
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ideas that I think you should consider. I can advice you these three jobs: first one is being manager. I think you are doing well at
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job
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and can find your place easily.
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, teaching English could be great fit. Because as I know you were good at English and you like children. So
this
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job
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is suitable for you. And the
last
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one is looking into opportunities in business companies, perhaps in a junior or entry-level role.
This
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could give you valuable experience and earn enough money for yourself. I hope
this
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advice helps you make the decision that’s right for you Best regards, Jumaniyozova Jasmina
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coherence cohesion
Improve logical structure by clearly organizing your ideas into paragraphs, ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single main point.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to improve overall readability.
task achievement
Provide more detailed reasons or examples to strengthen your arguments and enhance task achievement.
suitable writing tone
Your tone is warm and considerate, which is very suitable for a letter offering advice to a friend.
greeting and closing
You include a clear greeting and closing, which helps frame your letter well.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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