Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letter: Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear sir/madam
I am Xasanov Diyorbek. One week before I bought
keyboard
Add an article
a keyboard
to
my computer from your shop. After Change preposition
for
that
I came Add a comma
that,
to
home and used it but it did not work.
I am writing in order to complain Change preposition
apply
about
. The first thing I would like to draw your attention Correct pronoun usage
about this
is
the problem is doing but Change preposition
to is
effects
Correct your spelling
affects
to
my job because I am working at home and I Change preposition
apply
did
not worked Verb problem
have
week
. If I Add an article
a week
did
not work one more week I Wrong verb form
do
will
not get Wrong verb form
would
pay
Wrong verb form
paid
from
work or I Change preposition
for
will
be Wrong verb form
would
fried
Correct your spelling
fired
from
Change preposition
by
company
.
To resolve the problem send me Add an article
the company
a company
new
keyboard as I bought one or pay me back Correct article usage
a new
full
refund. I would like to Add an article
a full
recieve
Correct your spelling
receive
as
soon as possible but not later Correct pronoun usage
it as
then
Replace the word
than
a
two days. I would Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Correct your spelling
appreciate
apprecite
if you could
I look forward to your replyCorrect your spelling
appreciate
a
Correct word choice
and a
Correct your spelling
resolution
resulotion
to my problem
Yours Correct your spelling
response
faithfullys
Xasanov DiyorbekCorrect your spelling
faithfully
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task achievement
Ensure to proofread your letter to fix any grammatical errors and typos. For instance, 'fried' should be 'fired', and 'I did not worked' should be 'I did not work'.
coherence cohesion
Clarify your sentences to convey your message more effectively. For example, 'The first thing I would like to draw your attention is the problem is doing but effects to my job' can be improved to 'Firstly, this issue is significantly affecting my job.'
coherence cohesion
The structure of your letter follows a logical progression, covering the main points necessary for the subject.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, creating a suitable tone for a formal complaint letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph of your letter appropriately focuses on a single idea, which aids in clarity and reader understanding.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is suitable for a formal complaint, displaying a good level of politeness and professionalism.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite