The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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which the

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canes

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is produced.

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, there are 7 steps to produce sugars, from planting the

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to drying and cooling mechanism, and

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sugar

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ready to consume.

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the picture,

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, the

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sugar

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are planted around 12-18,

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after they grow successfully, the

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crops

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will be harvested. There are 2 ways of harvesting

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cane; first harvest it manually by farmers by chopping the

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plants, meanwhile the other one is by using special harvesting tractors that can harvest far faster in a large amount of

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sugar

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. After being harvested, the

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canes are squeezed in a crushing

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to produce juice and separate it from the residue. Having been purified through a limestone filter, the purified juice

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put into an evaporator

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a high temperature to gain a solid syrup. Before being dried and cooled in a

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box, the syrup is processed in a high-speed centrifuge

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, the function is to separate the crystals from the syrup.

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, after the crystals are separated, dried and cooled,

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the

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is ready for consumption.