You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in starting a course at your
sports
club
. My name is E'zoza, and I am nearly 16 years old. I have been a team leader with 2 years of experience, but nowadays, I am particularly interested in sports
.
I am interested in joining this
sports
club
because I want to improve my fitness. I believe that if I stop exercising, I will never lose weight. Additionally
, I would like to participate in tennis
competitions. My parents believe that I have a passion for tennis
. Despite this
passion, I know I must stay active. Moreover
, I also
have a passion for chess
. Last
year, I won a chess
competition. It was relatively simple, but I believe the next competition may be more challenging.
I have a few questions about the club
. Can you provide advanced training in both chess
and tennis
? Additionally
, how much does membership at the sports
club
cost per month? I am interested in joining both the chess
and tennis
programs, and I am willing to pay the required fees.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
E'zozaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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complete response
Expand on why there are no sports facilities in the college and how joining the sports club will benefit you.
single idea per paragraph
Separate the different topics into distinct paragraphs for clarity, such as your interest in tennis and chess.
complete response
The letter covers all the required points, including the introduction, the reason for interest in the sports club, and questions about the club's facilities and costs.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is polite and formal, suitable for a letter to a club manager.
logical structure
The letter is logically structured with a clear flow from introduction to closing.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and add a nice touch of politeness.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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