The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares the amount of various exported items from a nation between the two years, 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, in the beginning
period of time,the highest Add the comma(s)
beginning,
value
was of petroleum products
and the lowest was of textiles
whereas
at the end
, along with
the petroleum products
, engineered goods were also
sold at the same highest price and beside textiles
, agricultural products
too were the cheapest and exported at the same price.
From the graph, the value
of petroleum products
was as high as $60 billion
in the year
2015. After a year
, it increased further
by almost $2 billion
. Not only this
but also
engineered goods was
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were
also
able to maintain the same value
of nearly $62 billion
after making an increment of roughly $4 billion
. Similarly
, in the previous year
,the cost of agricultural products
outweighed textiles
by approximately $2billion
, Correct your spelling
2 billion
however
, textiles
rose to the same position in the following year
by increasing its'
Correct your spelling
its
value
by about $4billion
. Correct your spelling
4 billion
Furthermore
, gems and jewellery was
the only category that dropped Correct subject-verb agreement
were
its
' Correct pronoun usage
their
value
by about $2billion
and sold at $Correct your spelling
2 billion
40billion
in the Correct your spelling
40 billion
year
2016.Submitted by raialon4047 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, textiles, billion, year with synonyms.
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