The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares the amount of various exported items from a nation between the two years, 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, in the Linking Words
beginning
period of time,the highest Add the comma(s)
beginning,
value
was of petroleum Use synonyms
products
and the lowest was of Use synonyms
textiles
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whereas
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at the end
, Linking Words
along with
the petroleum Linking Words
products
, engineered goods were Use synonyms
also
sold at the same highest price and beside Linking Words
textiles
, agricultural Use synonyms
products
too were the cheapest and exported at the same price.
From the graph, the Use synonyms
value
of petroleum Use synonyms
products
was as high as $60 Use synonyms
billion
in the Use synonyms
year
2015. After a Use synonyms
year
, it increased Use synonyms
further
by almost $2 Linking Words
billion
. Not only Use synonyms
this
but Linking Words
also
engineered goods Linking Words
was
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were
also
able to maintain the same Linking Words
value
of nearly $62 Use synonyms
billion
after making an increment of roughly $4 Use synonyms
billion
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in the previous Linking Words
year
,the cost of agricultural Use synonyms
products
outweighed Use synonyms
textiles
by approximately $Use synonyms
2billion
, Correct your spelling
2 billion
however
, Linking Words
textiles
rose to the same position in the following Use synonyms
year
by increasing Use synonyms
its'
Correct your spelling
its
value
by about $Use synonyms
4billion
. Correct your spelling
4 billion
Furthermore
, gems and jewellery Linking Words
was
the only category that dropped Correct subject-verb agreement
were
its
' Correct pronoun usage
their
value
by about $Use synonyms
2billion
and sold at $Correct your spelling
2 billion
40billion
in the Correct your spelling
40 billion
year
2016.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, textiles, billion, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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