You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The line graph illustrates the trend of opening new and closing existing
shops
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from 2011 to 2018.
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, it is evident from the graph that the trend of opening and closing dropped during the period of time from what they started. The
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which are closed in 2011 were above 6000, continued to increase just above 7000 in 2013 with a small dip in 2012 and again there was a slight
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in 2014 accounting for an approximate count of 6500.
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, the number of new
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started at nearly 8500 in 2011,
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there was a significant
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reaching 4000 in 2012. Following 2 years there was a stable increase reaching above 6000. During the next 4 years, there was a sudden
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and rise in the closing of
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reaching as low as below 1000 in 2015 and spiking above 5000 in 2016.
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, opening new
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recorded a
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of nearly 2000 in 2015 but, it remained unchanged over the following years till 2017 and dropped by 1000 to settle at 3000 in 2018. In a similar fashion from 2016 to 2018, the closing remained stable at around 5000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, drop with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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