In many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society?

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in sciences is falling

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countries which potentially contributed

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various factors, others argue that the fall of these groups can impact

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society negatively

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the improvement of the

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of the course

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make numerous people

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drop out.

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is

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because these subjects have to

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work

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as logic and problem-solving and it took a longer period to

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the course

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with

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.

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these field

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will generally accept and create more career growth rather

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the

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degree alone which

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them

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struggle in their

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even longer and some might have to maintain their

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the training. Take healthcare fields,

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; few youngster decide to leave

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this

field

due to

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they have to encounter and even worse if they want to specialize in their professions.

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due to

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why it can play a major role in

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detrimental outcome. To simply explain, these

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of

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are considered to be the

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of the

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and some

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might not happened. To reduce the

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's expenditure, rather than hiring foreign professors they can hire

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specialists

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support their people to develop the country.

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offering financial

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and greater emphasis on the

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of teaching

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for

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sciences

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subjects can attract those who

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in science to join more.

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, offering

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and grants can attract students who experiencing

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but qualify for the applications. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that

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in sciences can be intensive which surprisingly

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the

nation

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development as a whole, I am of the opinion that

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providing adequate financial

supports

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will appeal

more

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people to

study

in

this

field.