You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the meneger of the nearest private sports club. In your letter × introduce yourself × say why you are interested in this sports club × ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask
information
about Change preposition
for information
Muborak
Correct article usage
the Muborak
Sports
club
I am planning to attend soon.
I am Sevinch Muxtorova and I have just started a course Capitalize word
Club
in
a college. In Change preposition
at
this
college
I can learn other languages Add a comma
college,
such
as Korean, Russian and so on.
I heard that this
sports
club
is exceed
than other Verb problem
more expensive
sports
club
in Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
this
city. In addition
, in college that I am studying recently has no sports
facilities, that's why I am interested in this
club
. I like sport
and sport
is my thing. It will be great
experience for me if I Add an article
a great
be
at Change the verb form
am
this
club
sport
is entertainment
and it keeps us healthy. Replace the word
entertaining
Also
, it reliefs
Replace the word
relieves
the
stress, Correct article usage
apply
for example
, when I am in stress, I do sport
.
There are Correct article usage
a vareity
vareity
of things I want to know about your Correct your spelling
variety
sports
club
. What kind of facilities have in your club
and how much I
have to pay in a month? Please tell me about it and is it alright if I know how many Add a missing verb
do I
member
Change to a plural noun
members
has
in Verb problem
are
club
. If there are so many people, I believe that, Correct article usage
the club
this
club
is great.
I look forward to hearing from you! I would appreciate it if you could inform me as soon as possible. You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or a fax.
Yours faithfully,
Sevinch MuxtorovaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task response
Ensure that you review and correct minor grammatical issues and improve sentence fluency. For example, 'I am writing to ask information about Muborak Sports club I am planning to attend soon.' could be 'I am writing to inquire about the Muborak Sports Club, which I am planning to join soon.'
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a single concept. This improves readability and logical flow.
task response
Use a consistent formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid phrases that may come across as too casual, such as 'sport is my thing.' Instead, you could say 'I am very passionate about sports.'
task response
The letter includes all the necessary information as per the instructions in the prompt: introduction, reason for interest, and specific questions about the club.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-formulated and appropriate for a formal letter.
coherence and cohesion
The main ideas are clear and logically ordered, which enhances coherence and cohesion.