The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library.
The pie charts illustrate how
undergraduates
and postgraduates assess satisfactory levels on
the variety of books and non-printed materials.
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of
Overall
, while
the majority of undergraduates
consider two criterias
to get the highest level of satisfaction, the minority was said to have not up to Correct your spelling
criteria
expectation
experience. Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
Additionally
, satisfied experience
had the highest number of feed feedback by Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
postgraduate
, whilst the opposite case was for not satisfied ones.
Regarding the data of the various genres of books, the proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduates
undergraduates
had
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who had
satisfaction
and very good experience Add an article
the satisfaction
were
relatively similar, about 35%, and the figure for not good Change the verb form
was
experiences
are
lower, at 28%. Wrong verb form
was
However
, half of postgraduates feel the variation of books is not good, which was double that of very good and satisfied feelings, with 22 and 28%.
Turning to the non-printed materials, while
above 60% of undergraduates
rate the diversity to be very good, this
percentage was true for the not good
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not-good
experiences
by postgraduates. The percentage of satisfaction for undergraduates
is almost double the figures for not good experiences
(20% and 12%), the figures for graduates was
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were
opposite
, with 12% for very good and 22% for satisfactory Correct article usage
the opposite
experiences
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