The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given image represents the cyclic
reprocess
of Wrong verb form
reprocessing
plastic
items. Overall
, it is artificial
process which contains 9 stages Add an article
an artificial
begins
Wrong verb form
beginning
from
gathering Change preposition
with
plastic
and finishing by producing ready products.
To begin
, it can be seen that plastic
bottles are collecting
in the special bins with recycling Wrong verb form
collected
sign
Fix the agreement mistake
signs
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
gathered items deliver to recycling
Correct article usage
the recycling
center
by Change the spelling
centre
a
truck. The subsequent stage is sorting Correct article usage
apply
plastic
where specialists accept only that
bottles which Correct determiner usage
the
is
able to Change the verb form
are
recycling
. Wrong verb form
be recycled
Next,
sorted plastic
is compressing
into rectangular Wrong verb form
compressed
shaped
blocks before they Verb problem
apply
will be crushing
into small pieces and carefully washed in the boxes filled with water. Wrong verb form
are crushed
After
this
, resulted pieces go to machine
which produces Add an article
a machine
plastic
pellets and then
they are heating
to form raw materials. Wrong verb form
heated
Finally
, formed
raw materials Verb problem
apply
Add a missing verb
are package
package
and go to Replace the word
packaged
manufactures
where produce lots of Correct your spelling
manufacturers
plastic
products such
as bottles, containers and packets. This
Change the determiner
This plastic item
These plastic items
plastic
items after using are able to recycle
again so Wrong verb form
be recycled
by
putting them in Change preposition
apply
the
special bins restarts Correct article usage
apply
this
process.Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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