The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given image represents the cyclic
reprocess
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reprocessing
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of
plastic
items.
Overall
, it is
artificial
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an artificial
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process which contains 9 stages
begins
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beginning
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from
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with
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gathering
plastic
and finishing by producing ready products.
To begin
, it can be seen that
plastic
bottles are
collecting
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collected
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in the special bins with recycling
sign
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signs
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,
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and
then
gathered items deliver to
recycling
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the recycling
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center
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centre
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by
a
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apply
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truck. The subsequent stage is sorting
plastic
where specialists accept only
that
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the
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bottles which
is
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are
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able to
recycling
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be recycled
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.
Next,
sorted
plastic
is
compressing
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compressed
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into rectangular
shaped
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blocks before they
will be crushing
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are crushed
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into small pieces and carefully washed in the boxes filled with water.
After
this
, resulted pieces go to
machine
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a machine
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which produces
plastic
pellets and
then
they are
heating
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heated
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to form raw materials.
Finally
,
formed
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raw materials
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are package
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package
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packaged
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and go to
manufactures
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manufacturers
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where produce lots of
plastic
products
such
as bottles, containers and packets.
This
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This plastic item
These plastic items
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plastic
items after using are able to
recycle
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be recycled
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again so
by
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apply
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putting them in
the
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apply
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special bins restarts
this
process.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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