The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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The picture illustrates the cycle of producing biofuel (ethanol). As shown, there are several distinct stages in
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process, from the initial natural sources to the final generation of carbon dioxide.
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in the first stage, many plants and trees grow, and are
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harvested by agricultural machines in the second stage. In the next step, these harvested materials go through pre-processing and become cellulose.
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the fifth stage, cellulose is processed in factories and converted into sugars. In the
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part of
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process, sugars are added to microbes.
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, they are remixed to produce ethanol. Afterwards, ethanol is used in a wide range of transportation and vehicles,
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as cars, trucks, and
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, all of which generate a significant amount of carbon dioxide.
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carbon dioxide and sunlight serve as energy for forests and plants.
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cycle
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begins again from the first step.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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