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The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given graphs provide key information about the amount of profit spent on Australia's trade in three countries between 2004 and 2009. The measurement unit is the Australian dollars.
Overall
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, it is clear from the charts that In 2005, the amount of imports is the same in the three different countries.
In addition
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, the amount of export is the same in China and US
whereas
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 it is slightly different in Japan.
According to
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 what is shown,Regarding Australia's exports,Japan reached the highest peak with roughly 60 In comparison with China and the US which hit 40.
On the other hand
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, when it came to Australia's imports,
US
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 and Japan showed a steady rhythm of 20 and 40 respectively
in contrast
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 to China which witnessed a significant fall to 20 in 2005 and
then
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 a high rise in 2008
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which it achieved almost 40.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
  • trade barriers
  • tariff
  • free trade agreement
  • economic indicators
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