The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The given graphs provide key information about the amount of profit spent on Australia's trade in three countries between 2004 and 2009. The measurement unit is the Australian dollars.

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, it is clear from the charts that In 2005, the amount of imports is the same in the three different countries.

In addition

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, the amount of export is the same in China and US

whereas

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it is slightly different in Japan.

According to

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what is shown,Regarding Australia's exports,Japan reached the highest peak with roughly 60 In comparison with China and the US which hit 40.

On the other hand

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, when it came to Australia's imports,

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the US

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and Japan showed a steady rhythm of 20 and 40 respectively

in contrast

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to China which witnessed a significant fall to 20 in 2005 and

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a high rise in 2008

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which it achieved almost 40.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

143 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

trade surplus
trade deficit
bilateral trade
exports
imports
economic relationship
year-on-year growth
trade volume
upward trend
downward trend
fluctuations
peak
trough
stagnation
commodities
market forces
import/export ratio
financial quarter
trade barriers
tariff
free trade agreement
economic indicators

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The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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