The line graph shows visitor numbers to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016
The graph compares the number of
people
who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city
between 1996 dan 2016.
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City
Overall
, the National Gallery was by far the most popular venue after 2000, although
the Indigenous Art Centre also
was
a rise in visitor numbers. Verb problem
saw
While
fewer people
went to the aquarium and zoo over the two decades, museum attendance remained fairly stable.
In 1996, the aquarium was the main attraction, with over 500,000 people
coming through people
in 1996, it then
enjoyed a huge rise in popularity over the next 10 years, peaking at almost 400,000 visitors in 2004 and reaching a similar figure in 2016. By that year, also
, the National Gallery had seen an unparalleled increase in visitors to almost 1 million.
Meanwhile, over the period shown, aquarium attendance plummeted by about 400,000, going from the most to the least visited venue. The zoo's figure fell substantially as well, though less dramatically, while
the museum was little deviation from around 450,000 annual visitors.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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