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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The chart depicts the
tea
 and
coffee
 drinking habits of citizens in five different
Austrlian
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Australian
cities
.
It is clear that
 except
Adelaide
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in Adelaide
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, the percentage of residents
went
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who went
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 to a
cafe
 is more than bought fresh or instant
coffee
 in the rest of
cities
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the cities
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. People living in Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart and Brisbane tend to have
coffee
 or
tea
 in a
cafe
, especially in the first three
cities
 for more than 60%. As for the proportion of instant
coffee
 bought in these five
cities
are
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is
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 in the range of 45% to 55%, which is
lesser
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less
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 than the percentage of people
went
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who went
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 to a
cafe
 but more than those
bought
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who bought
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 fresh
coffee
. Fresh
coffee
 bought in
last
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the last
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 4 weeks
are
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is
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 the least one that people
did
Verb problem
apply
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compare to the other two. In Sydney and Melbourne, the drinking
habit
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habits
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 of
coffee
 and
tea
 are more popular than Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart
overall
.
However
, instant
coffee
 and manmade
coffee
 or
tea
 in the store are almost at the
propotion
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proportion
promotion
proposition
 about a little bit more than 50% in the former and nearly 50% in the latter. In conclusion, residents in
the
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apply
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four out of five
cities
have
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apply
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favor
in have
Wrong verb form
having
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a
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apply
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coffee
 or
tea
 in
the
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a
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cafe
 and fresh
coffee
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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 in the
last
 position among
three
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the three
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 drinking habits.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, cities, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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