Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some
people
like to eat at Use synonyms
food
stands and fine-dine restaurants Use synonyms
while
others prefer eating homemade Linking Words
meals
. Proponents who prefer eating at home Use synonyms
essentiates
the Correct your spelling
emphasise
importance
of homemade Use synonyms
meals
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
prefer
Correct pronoun usage
who prefer
takeout
Use synonyms
food
and Use synonyms
resturant
Correct your spelling
restaurant
food
describe the Use synonyms
importance
of their work and their stressful working environment. Use synonyms
This
essay will explore why Linking Words
this
is the case and try to describe why I prefer eating homemade Linking Words
meals
with suitable examples.
To being with, Use synonyms
people
who prefer eating outside Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
takeout
or in restaurants Use synonyms
describes
their preference based on the Correct subject-verb agreement
describe
importance
of Use synonyms
food
in their Use synonyms
life
. For some, eating Fix the agreement mistake
lives
food
is just to replenish their energy so they can work more, Use synonyms
while
for some it is the only option for them since they are unable to cook for themselves. Linking Words
For instance
, professionals like doctors and corporate Linking Words
employee
generally Fix the agreement mistake
employees
does
not have Change the verb form
do
luxury
to afford homemade Add an article
the luxury
meals
Use synonyms
due to
their overbearing time constraints Linking Words
due to
which they prefer takeouts or restaurant Linking Words
food
.
Use synonyms
Conversely
, Linking Words
people
who prefer homemade Use synonyms
meals
Use synonyms
describes
the Correct subject-verb agreement
describe
importance
of their Use synonyms
food
based on reasons Use synonyms
such
as their unique experience Linking Words
while
preparing their Linking Words
food
and adjusting it to their Use synonyms
likliness
, affordability, taste, and dietary qualities. Correct your spelling
likeliness
likeness
For instance
, looking from two perspectives, one Linking Words
that
every Add a missing verb
is that
children
loves the Change to a singular noun
child
food
that their mother makes because of the love and accuracy in Use synonyms
food
that Use synonyms
everymother
puts in their Correct your spelling
every mother
every other
families
Change noun form
family's
food
, on Use synonyms
other
, mother knows the quality and nutritional Correct article usage
the other
requirement
for their children. Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
Furthermore
, restaurant and Linking Words
takeout
Use synonyms
meals
Use synonyms
comes
at a hefty price tag Change the verb form
come
whereas
homemade Linking Words
meals
Use synonyms
offers
affordability and nutritional Change the verb form
offer
values
.
In conclusion, I believe it is understandable to eat Fix the agreement mistake
value
takeout
and restaurant Use synonyms
food
on some Use synonyms
occations
considering Correct your spelling
occasions
Use synonyms
people
professions and their stressful environment. Change noun form
people's
However
, I strongly believe that the daily nutritional value that homemade Linking Words
meals
Use synonyms
are
crucial for a healthy lifestyle.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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