The chart below shows the distribution of the population of three regions of the world by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the most important features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the distribution of the different age groups in the three
regions
, namely, developed, less developed, and the least developed areas
. Moreover
, these data were recorded in the year 2021.
Overall
, the group
of the elderly showed a higher rate in the developed regions
, presenting less proportion in the other two areas
. In contrast
, the younger people accounted for less percentage in developed regions
, representing a higher rate in developing areas
.
To begin
with, the item of 25-64 years exceeded 50% in developed and less developed regions
(53 and 51% respectively). However
, this
only constituted 18% in developing countries.
Subsequently
, the group
of 65+ years made up 20% of developed countries. Nevertheless
, the proportion of this
group
did not surpass 10 per cent in other areas
, especially in the least developed regions
, which only presented 4%. As for the youngest group
, although
the least developed regions
accounted for 14%, this
did not exceed 8% in other areas
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words regions, areas, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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