During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him when and where you met. Tell him what kind of job you are interested in Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear

Mustafo

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Mustafa

, I am writing to inquire about

get

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a new

job

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.I hope that you can provide me with a

job

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in one of your restaurants. My name is Javohir Pulatov. We met on the plane two months ago when you were going to New York and we talked a lot.

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my unemployment, you offered me new a

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at one of your restaurants. When I was young, I told my father that I would become a famous businessman later I became interested in social media marketing and I studied in

this

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field

increased

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my knowledge.

Then

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I started working in

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field. Social media marketing has become

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field in every business these days.As far as I

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you need an employee who has potential in social media marketing, and I found myself suitable for

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job

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. Please let me know if you need any additional information.Thank you for your consideration Best regards Pulatov Javohir

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task achievement

Include a subject line to make the purpose of the letter clearer.

task achievement

Consider providing specific examples of your social media marketing experience to strengthen your suitability for the job.

coherence cohesion

Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow between ideas and paragraphs.

coherence cohesion

Review grammar and punctuation to avoid minor errors, such as missing spaces after periods and commas.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

complete response

The letter conveys all the required information: reminding the businessman of your meeting, stating your job interest, and explaining why you are suitable.

suitable writing tone

The overall tone of the letter is suitable for a formal request.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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