During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him when and where you met. Tell him what kind of job you are interested in Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear
Mustafo
,
I am writing to inquire about Correct your spelling
Mustafa
get
a new Change the verb form
getting
job
.I hope that you can provide me with a job
in one of your restaurants.
My name is Javohir Pulatov. We met on the plane two months ago when you were going to New York and we talked a lot. Due to
my unemployment, you offered me new a job
at one of your restaurants.
When I was young, I told my father that I would become a famous businessman later I became interested in social media marketing and I studied in this
field increased
my knowledge. Change the verb form
to increase
Then
I started working in this
field.
Social media marketing has become necessary
field in every business these days.As far as I Add an article
a necessary
know
you need an employee who has potential in social media marketing, and I found myself suitable for Add a comma
know,
this
job
.
Please let me know if you need any additional information.Thank you for your consideration
Best regards
Pulatov JavohirSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Include a subject line to make the purpose of the letter clearer.
task achievement
Consider providing specific examples of your social media marketing experience to strengthen your suitability for the job.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to improve the flow between ideas and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Review grammar and punctuation to avoid minor errors, such as missing spaces after periods and commas.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
complete response
The letter conveys all the required information: reminding the businessman of your meeting, stating your job interest, and explaining why you are suitable.
suitable writing tone
The overall tone of the letter is suitable for a formal request.